Wednesday 24 July 2013

Assignment 1

Dear CityU principal,

       I am writing to recommend our outstanding student, Chung Shun Hung Kelvin, to join City University of Hong Kong. Owing to his leadership skills and remarkable academic results, we are sure that he can join CityU.

      He is a leader in our school. He organized various clubs and unions such as Rock Music Club and a Student Union. He revealed that he is a good leader and has good leadership skills. As the presidents of Student Union and Rock Music Club, he instructed his teams very well and organized different activities such as KH-7 Football Competition game and Korea Study tour in our school. It shows that he is a good leader in the school.

     Apart form Kelvin’s leadership skills, his academic performance is outstanding. As an art student in senior forms, he got the first in Chinese History and History. Better still; he got double As in these to subjects in both the HKCEE and HKALE. It proves that he can also perform well at university level. As a result of good performance in academic, Kelvin will be a brilliant student who will show good learning attitude at CityU.

     Moreover, his extra-activities outside school are also a consideration. He joined Mock Trail Competition and won the best debater. It significantly shows that he can not only perform well in school but also outside school.

       We strongly hope that you will provide him a precious opportunity to study in City University of Hong Kong. We look forward to seeing him to be part of CityU.


                                       
                                                                                                                  Yours faithfully,
                      Ng So Man

      The Principal of KHSS

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